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Running- the creature fled. His mind, frightened, betrayed his every sense. The darkened wood, not six hours ago a sanctuary of peace, was now the breeding ground of every monstrous being imaginable. Each branch was a claw reaching to snatch him away in their grasp. Every sound amidst the sleepless night was a threat coming closer all the while.
Chest heaving, he stumbled to the base of a crooked tree. Fear still told him to run, but his body would have no more. Exhausted- he was forced to rest beneath the moonless sky.
©2008-2009 ~crossblades08
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I told you all I was working on a story, so here it is.

This is only the prologue. Chapter 1 is curently going through major revision because I don't like my 2nd person narrator anymore.

It still has no title, though.

Thanks, any criticism would be nice.

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